Warrior-Dragon's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-=[ The Last ]=-]

No idea why it took me so long

I just recently (within the last 2 weeks, don't ask me why it's taken me so long to review XD) became a huge fan of your music, all of it becoming very brain-captivating and adventureous; This one is no exception, "You are the last..." and blast-off! Brain is now frag-'naded all over the inner quarters of outer space. For most people I'd give critiquing, but your audio page is nothing but a trophy showcase, proving that you require little critiquing as you definately provide well for yourself in your own critiquing. It seems that you're consistant in 1 song per month (for the most part, there are a few gaps, understandable for a 15 year-old.), so with that note I'll definately be keeping an eye out for your next works of art. 5up, most definately!

Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.

XsToRmEr1 responds:

Thanks for your review. And I DO care about you! I care about all my fans! They are the rewards I get for making my music. I wouldn't be producing music otherwise. Whether I'm being paid money or not, I will keep making music because its people like you that make me feel good about doing it. Again, thanks for your review. :)

[Technobia]

errrrrr dude...

I have no idea how you decided to render this, but it sounded like you were just holding a microphone to your speakers. You need to rerender this because there's always a mean hissing sound in the background, and the music itself hurts my ears due to capping and such. Check it out for yourself. Other than that, it sounded like it'd be a good song. Likewise for Opperoptics.

Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know nor care about.

Pikalter responds:

I Wonder Where I Can Get A Mic To Plug Into My Comp....

[Slave of Urania[DEMO]]

Very awesome, I love it!

Great demo! I can NOT wait for the complete version! It's loud! I LOVE loud! However, there was a little bit of cracking due to capping, I'm sure you'll take care of that before the full version is complete. 5up!

Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.

[The one song to rule them all]

Wow. Holy crap!

Ummmm... This song kinda sounds like it might be stolen or something, but if it isn't, then DAMN!! I totally hope that I remember this track, because I'm about to format my drive, but I so want to download it later. 5up for now.

Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know nor care about.

[_New_ (demo)]

I'd definately continue this!

I should point out, that this is actually a lot closer to Industrial, not techno. But that's not a bad thing, and I would most definately continue it; however if I might make a suggestion, it would be to add a guitar, or some sort of tone instrument, it sounds like mostly beats and drums, which isn't bad, but doesn't make for much of a filling song. Anyway, there's my 2 cents. 5up!

Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.

Ak-17 responds:

Thanks man, yeah originaly I thought that it would be just drums however now I think that it could use a sinth or a guitar.
P.S. And yeah I did not know where to put it exactly ;P !!

[ParagonX9 vs KFNX - The Legend]

Great song, but you probably don't care.

Do you reply to any of your reviews at all anymore? You've become so popular now that nearly all of your stuff has a reward of some sort, and you no longer need to reply to your fans because, of course, you're so popular now, that they don't matter. Please prove me wrong. Show your fans that you care. Give out replies generously. 5up... not that you need it, or that I could make any sort of dent in the endless 5's you're going to get.

Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.

ParagonX9 responds:

Hello Warrior Dragon.
I know.. It's just that i don't really have the time anymore to write replies to everyone. bt I do read all of them. and I appreciate all comments n stuff..

Anyways, thank you for still giving me a positive review! =) ..
(I know my english still sucks :S this reply took me almost 10 minutes>_<)

[TMNT 4 - Highway (Corrected)]

Wow. Truely crazy.

OK, well, as usual, everything kicked ass; beautiful choice of instruments and effects. Great beat, nothing was overbearing or out of place. And for those reading this aside from the author, pay CLOSE attention, there is a VERY intricate guitar and keyboard in the background that is EXTREMELY hard to catch, but they're there, and they are NICE. 5up!

Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you should play gameboy with sometime! :D

[MM1-Elecman Remix]

No offense Viewtiful-Masta, but that was the point

:) The intro was supposed to be sub-par and midly uninteresting so that once the actual hard melody kicks in, it sounds that much better. 5up most definately!

Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.

Weapongod30 responds:

Thx Warrior, for your review!

[Coffee!]

Honestly now. How am I the FIRST to review this?!

OK, well, your intro was beautiful, the drums sounded perfect, and so did the guitar when it first came in, like undescribably perfect, entirely original riffs. Then the guitar vanishes suddenly and this really kinda crappy sounding bass comes in, with a horribly muffled drumset of some sort. The bass actually played well, but with the way the quality of it came out, whether this happened somewhere during rendering or something, made it sound really horribly counterproductive. The person playing the bass played it awesomely, but it sounded horrible; and it's hard to have a bass solo period. It needs accompaniment. But after that mid segment and the guitar comes in again I'm loving it and I'm happy again :D!.. But only for a moment because then the song ends abruptly and entirely, in the middle of a friggen beat, even. That was depressing :(. I'll give you a 5up, though, no matter how much I wish you'd work on it just a bit more to make it longer, and to fix that midsegment.

Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.

cosmicrandom responds:

OGFM HAY WOAH TOOE LOGN BTU TAHNX FOER LIEKIEGN IET1!!11!1!1!!!!!!!!!11111111!!!!11

[Lightswitch Rave]

Definately an original and worthy piece.

I could see where you were going with this, well, I could hear it, rather, and I honestly enjoyed it. The best critique I can give is to reopen your source file of this, and give it some kind of tune or melody in the -treble- clef, or at least somewhere around the treble clef. Pure bass like this (aside frome your drums, the light switch, and the spoon sounding rhythm) just sounds like a foundation to a song, it's nothing you can really groove or respond to. I'll give you 4up, but if you went over it again I'd totally want to give you a 6.

Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.