Uhhh..?
It was definately an original piece, but nearly everything in it was out of place and sounded like somebody screaming while launching feces into the toilet... Um don't ask me how I came up with that analogy. Anyhow, I'm assuming by the way you described it, that it's old, and didn't have much work put into it, either way, you can probably learn a lot about what NOT to do with your future music through this. 2up :(
Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.
Heh. An updated version of one of my oooooold pieces. I think the third song I did. It is, however, the first non-crap one. My original two will never see the light of day, unless I become some sort of cult icon or something... so yeah, never see the light of day.
I liked this!
The guitar riffs were cool, if not slightly repetative, the drums were OK, until you brought in the symbols; the sound bites were funny, but slightly out of place, you could definately do something creative with this song if you opened it up once more and just looked at it for a while... thought about it, and thought about how maybe you could break certain parts out of the loop. Music for the most part does have a looping rhythm or repeated chorus type thing, and that's OK, but at the same time you want to quirk parts in and out of the loop to hold interest and artistic value. Anyhow, I'm giving you 4up, I'll be watching.
Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.
I appreciate the kind criticism. Once I obtain Fruity Loops again I'll be sure to take your advice into account and try to carve out something more masterful. I made this song in-between my first album and my second, so it's got the best (and worst) of both worlds in it.
Uhhh, righty XD!
OK, well, as far as the song goes, it wasn't bad; although at the same time I kinda get the feeling that just by saying that I'm falling for some stupid kinda joke. The guitars were cool, the samples were not. The beat and drums were also cool, but the title of the song was not. Also, this isn't really any kind of core, it's closer to what you labeled it as, Industrial. I'm going to give you 4up, only because by the way you titled it, and with the sound bites I get the feeling that it was actually some kinda condiscending joke against metal or hardcore (not dance-hardcore).
Thanks for the clarification. Industrial is one of those musics that seems to have a broader field than others, and I know a lot of people like to be specific. Back when I made this song (about a year ago, I think) my mates and I were way into repetition in music. "Mass production" and all that. This is honestly a remix of one of my earlier works, and I'm aware it's not that stellar, but some of my more preferred stuff is too large, and alas I no longer have the program with which to edit it.
This was great! But I wouldn't exactly call it HC
It was supurbly played, great beat, and awesome guitars. I loved it. However, I'm a "hardcore kid", or whatever, and I spend about 90% of my time writing, listening to, and trying to find more Hardcore, or subcategories of. This didn't sound much like hardcore in my oppinion, at least not until the end; I'd try to describe what I mean a little more vividly, but that would just discredit this track, and I have no intention of doing that, becuase the effort you put into this shows, and it sounds awesome. 5up!
Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.
thanks for the comment. im more into death metal and such. and i thought id try to go outside the box and do something else. this was my first attempt so its not like im some hxc mesiah.
peace bro
One line summary?! For THIS?! Impossible.
Reading your VIEWTIFUL reviews that you give to others has always been pretty cool, seeing as you are, in my oppinion, a fair reviewer; and then finding out that you actually MADE music as well, oh man, I HAD to come over here and check it out; and what did I find, you ask? Viewtiful Brain Ass-Kickery! Normally I'm not much into D'n'B, but you got me with this one. I haven't much critiquing to give except that I would love a longer version... I should probably turn this off now seeing as it's 11pm XD...
Maybe...
in a little bit...
Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.
Thanks man for the Viewtiful review! It's true I do give every one a good reviews even if they give me bad reviews. I just don't think its fair for the other people to go down so fast. I think that every one deserves a chance to be numero uno! Thanks for the review though! It was how you say VIEWTIFUL! It seems like that now that im starting to use term Viewtiful every one is starting to use it!
Be V!
V-M
DUDE!! CAN YOU HEAR THAT BASS?!!?
THIS BOY PLAYS HIS OWN SAXAPHONE TOO!! OMG!! IT'S SO MASTURFUL!! *seizes and foams at the mouth*
Heh. Yes I do. Calm down, Beavis. Uh huh huh huh.
Dude, seriously, wow.
Same review as the previous BoF3 track, brings me right back to the place in the game as young Ryu where I'm totally starting to freak out and go, "WTF!! I LOVE THIS!!! SO MUCH!!!" 5up!
Sweet, I'm glad it does that to you
Seriously people. BoF. Go buy it.
Seriously people, BoF, buy it, give Capcom a reason to stop making shitty-ass games. This sounds exactly like the overworld theme... which makes me want to cry, that game was so beautiful... Final Fantasy stands not nearly as tall as the grace of Breath of Fire... And the fact that you play most of your instruments makes it THAT much more amazing... I think I'm gonna go shit my pants now, excuse me. F-F-F-F-F-F-5UPAGE!
Sincerely,
Er... echo?...echo...echo..ec..
haha, sweeet. BoF IS good, I think it seriously rivals final fantasy. Except for BoF5, that game sucked the hair off my balls.
ARRGG... You got MEH!
I was just about to stop listening to this and move on, when you brought in the bells; I am EXTREMELY partial to bells and music boxes, and I absolutely LOVE what you did with them... and then the song fades out... and I start crying because I wasn't done listening to them yet. That's probably the best critique I have to give you, work on proper song form and structure; you build in your intro masterfully, and then the body of your song sounds perfect, and you even progress the song with some building emphasis and power, but then you don't bring the song to a climax, and then you leave no conclusion/outro, so we just kinda have a premature ejaculation in our brains when the fadeout comes, and we're like, "Awwww... I wanted more..." *sad face* because our brains hadn't been properly disengaged from the song! Anyhow, hope that made sense, 5up for YOU!
Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.
No, I care about you and the great review you gave me. It made perfect sense to me. At the time when I made this song, I was obsessed with fades, so I never really created much of a climax. I will try to make my future songs to have something like that.
I'm happy you wanted more :), i guess you liked it a lot. Thnaks for reviewing.
And thanks for the 5!
I've said it once...
I'll say it again. All of your stuff, especially the stuff that sounds like this (And your Megametal stuff) is superb and kicks my ass on another degree. You deserve great amounts of undue credit-- 5up!
Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.
Lol If you care to talk about how much i rock :) then i care bout you to! Even for a random ng user. It's all the same in the end :)
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