Uhhh..?
It was definately an original piece, but nearly everything in it was out of place and sounded like somebody screaming while launching feces into the toilet... Um don't ask me how I came up with that analogy. Anyhow, I'm assuming by the way you described it, that it's old, and didn't have much work put into it, either way, you can probably learn a lot about what NOT to do with your future music through this. 2up :(
Sincerely,
A Random NG User whom you neither know, nor care about.